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## Wait Group
-Another important category is sync.WaitGroup. These allow co-operating goroutines to collectively wait for a threshold event before proceeding independently again. This is useful typically in two cases. Firstly, when 'cleaning up', a sync.WaitGroup can be used to ensure that all goroutines - including the main one - wait before all terminating at once.
+Another important category is sync.WaitGroup. These allow co-operating goroutines to collectively wait for a threshold event before proceeding independently again. This is useful typically in two cases.
-The second more general case is of a cyclic algorithm that involves independent work by the goroutines, then waiting on a barrier before proceeding independently. Data might be exchanged at the barrier event. This strategy is the basis of [Bulk Synchronous Parallelism](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bulk_synchronous_parallel) (BSP).
+Firstly, when 'cleaning up', a sync.WaitGroup can be used to ensure that all goroutines - including the main one - wait before all terminating cleanly.
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+The second more general case is of a cyclic algorithm that involves a set of goroutines that all work independently for a while, then all wait on a barrier, before proceeding independently again. This pattern might be repeated many times. Data might be exchanged at the barrier event. This strategy is the basis of [Bulk Synchronous Parallelism](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bulk_synchronous_parallel) (BSP).
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